A Winter's Heart - Rondeau #2
~~~~~Revised Draft~~~~~~~~~~He died by spring's seductive scent;gardenia's bloom on redolentwinds, hatchlings peeped at skies of blue,winter's ice turned to morning dewand dreams that stirred old...
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Nice to see you trying another of these, Liz I haven't written one in a few years (of course, I've still got 2 weeks left to work out a new one! )Very sad .... but lifted up a bit by your last stanza....
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A quiet dignity in this piece...obviously heartfelt... Every new beginning comes fromsome other beginnings end...Why not try a new beginning...at The Maelstrom...
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Hi Beth and Paul Sorry about the delay in getting back to reply. Lots over time at work and limited online time. THank you both for the encouragement. It is an excellent muse lifter to try on a new...
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A finely-tooled piece. It's a piece that uses the refrain in poignance. As has been said, the final stanza resolves the sad mood.HF
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Hi Liz,It's a great form to express a variety of feelings. Good on ya for trying it out!Merlin
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Hello Heinen, Thank so much for the excellent information and help through PM. The line still needs improvement, but at least it in step with natures schedule. I really know very little of such things...
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Hey Merlin, Thank you! Yes, and as you've warned...they are a bit addictive... the form has moved up into second slot spot on my favorite forms, just beneath Sonnets! Hugs, Liz Poetry911
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